sorry mate, i wrote a real long step by step breakdown - but i deleted it by accident!
So i will just say well done, you are brown.
-Focus on where the legs should be in all poses.
-Dont lean back in side chest/tri.
-raise elbows in front bicep, above parallel for the X frame.
-glance a leg out to the side in the front bi and lat, for the X, and to showcase some quads.
-bend elbows more in most muscular, clasp hands or clench them next to one another, pushing on each one with the other. Squeeze bis and roll the traps over too.
-Abs and thighs… you look like you are stepping over a shit. The leg isnt thrown out that far - it is placed NEXT to the bent one, quads and calves tensed. neater. Find some images of the style you like and copy it, making it your own.
I have a flair on my front bi, lat, side tri that is mine. Mixed from other BB’s but mine now!
A hip tilt from one, a leg from a female, elbows from someone else… you know. Whatever works with YOUR BODY.
STUDY MAGAZINES. download pics off the net. Meet an ex-competitor, whatever you need to do. I am pretty sure you have no visual aid in your posing and you need it.
not as detailed as i did write, but hope it helps. PM me if you need.
J