At least most of it rhymed. c-
[quote]countingbeans wrote:
I wouldn’t say it sucks at all. Just unpolished, and certainly not gangsta by any stretch.
You’ll get better with practice and once your production starts getting more “professional”.
I would say though that becoming more humble and learning how to take criticism will go a long way in helping you get much better, much faster.[/quote]
Yes because ‘gay’ is constructive criticism. I should really examine my sexuality.
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
Yes because ‘gay’ is constructive criticism. I should really examine my sexuality.[/quote]
If it ain’t brokeback, don’t fix it.
The beat was cool, and it had potential, but I didn’t really like your delivery. Sounded awkward.
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
I challenge anyone to make a better rap song than I have posted here. You guys are all just haters. I do shit, you guys talk shit. Seriously, this forum is just full of tactless hater trolls, you talk but you don’t do. So step up, make something better.[/quote]
Didn’t you ask for criticism… thats what they’re giving…
try again… it wasn’t great… but at least you’re making an attempt
Haha thats a bad beat you got there.
This how you do it
OK
sorry son but you need work/
id give you a lesson if i wasn’t so busy in the aftanoons/
takin care of business you kno how we do/
the other side of the moon/
a little place you I like to call boom boom/
POW!
I guess im caught up in the controversy/
my boy tiger been banging them chicks like groceries/
dat one bitch uchitel got my mind in blitz/
and it aint even sunday night!/
I had a dream and she was being flirtatious/
i take her cloths off and get it on like ferocious/
yeah its weird but no need to feel sorry/
kanye had a dream to be on stage with glory/
whilst taylor swift had a dream she packing double Dses/
whilst im in the studio producing my beats/
album sales flying faster off the sheleves than goodyear tires…
Trya Banks said she’d give me a blowjob
I said no babe/
im too busy
Yesss, you nearly as gay as adam lambert/
sorry for reality but it beats any fallacy/
hanging in the club youd swear it was a sausage fest/
and in the middle you n jimmy grinding in sync and harmony/
grow up son this aint 3rd grade with mr morrisey/
shut up and smoke that Ecstasy/
it might get u into girls again/
and if that dont work/
ill call dr knife and his plastic surgery/
Trans!
Its nothing personal just bidness
You dont have a rappers voice.
Sound quality sucks.
You have no beat.
Your rhymes are ok. It isn’t the words that make you sound so shitty.
You have absolutely no accent. Sound like a little kid whispering into the mic.
[quote]Gettnitdone wrote:
Haha thats a bad beat you got there.
This how you do it
OK
sorry son but you need work/
id give you a lesson if i wasn’t so busy in the aftanoons/
takin care of business you kno how we do/
the other side of the moon/
a little place you I like to call boom boom/
POW!
I guess im caught up in the controversy/
my boy tiger been banging them chicks like groceries/
dat one bitch uchitel got my mind in blitz/
and it aint even sunday night!/
I had a dream and she was being flirtatious/
i take her cloths off and get it on like ferocious/
yeah its weird but no need to feel sorry/
kanye had a dream to be on stage with glory/
whilst taylor swift had a dream she packing double Dses/
whilst im in the studio producing my beats/
album sales flying faster off the sheleves than goodyear tires…
Trya Banks said she’d give me a blowjob
I said no babe/
im too busy
Yesss, you nearly as gay as adam lambert/
sorry for reality but it beats any fallacy/
hanging in the club youd swear it was a sausage fest/
and in the middle you n jimmy grinding in sync and harmony/
grow up son this aint 3rd grade with mr morrisey/
shut up and smoke that Ecstasy/
it might get u into girls again/
and if that dont work/
ill call dr knife and his plastic surgery/
Trans!
Its nothing personal just bidness
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let me show you how business is conducted.
take note on how to make ghosts
place Colt to the guy’s throat
if he chokes give him the double dose
if that don’t hold
show him the ropes, let him know there’s no hope.
see, I’m the closet thing you’ll ever get to a god
so don’t fight let’s end the facade.
I keep it wickedly righteous,
which means I’m good enough for heaven but aint afraid of hell
old school like ll the way I’m rocking your bell.
You created your own thread to troll in, wow.
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
[quote]countingbeans wrote:
I wouldn’t say it sucks at all. Just unpolished, and certainly not gangsta by any stretch.
You’ll get better with practice and once your production starts getting more “professional”.
I would say though that becoming more humble and learning how to take criticism will go a long way in helping you get much better, much faster.[/quote]
Yes because ‘gay’ is constructive criticism. I should really examine my sexuality.[/quote]
If you feel you need to, go right ahead wannabe.
I don’t see how it’s even possible to rap that bad.
Don’t post the lyrics, post mp3 on youtube.
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
[quote]countingbeans wrote:
I wouldn’t say it sucks at all. Just unpolished, and certainly not gangsta by any stretch.
You’ll get better with practice and once your production starts getting more “professional”.
I would say though that becoming more humble and learning how to take criticism will go a long way in helping you get much better, much faster.[/quote]
Yes because ‘gay’ is constructive criticism. I should really examine my sexuality.[/quote]
Real world lesson #2:
Not all criticism is going to be constructive. Learn to deal with adversity like a grown man and be better for it. Specifically if you are going to put yourself out as a performer, expect to be shit on, and learn how to react as to not receive MORE shit because you reacted like a tool.
[quote]countingbeans wrote:
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
[quote]countingbeans wrote:
I wouldn’t say it sucks at all. Just unpolished, and certainly not gangsta by any stretch.
You’ll get better with practice and once your production starts getting more “professional”.
I would say though that becoming more humble and learning how to take criticism will go a long way in helping you get much better, much faster.[/quote]
Yes because ‘gay’ is constructive criticism. I should really examine my sexuality.[/quote]
Real world lesson #2:
Not all criticism is going to be constructive. Learn to deal with adversity like a grown man and be better for it. Specifically if you are going to put yourself out as a performer, expect to be shit on, and learn how to react as to not receive MORE shit because you reacted like a tool.
[/quote]
I’m not a performer man. I do this as a hobby. As a hobby person, among equals, you can say my music sucks, but to say I suck because of that, means you think you can do better. Because if a person can’t do better, then they must suck worse. So I’m saying, anyone who has a better track put it up. No pouting, real talk. I’m a man, I take constructive criticism from what I’ve read, so for the people who just wanna talk shit, do better, and let’s seee what you’ve got.
You don’t get it, never mind
No, I can’t do better, cuz I DON’T want to do better.
I have no interest in gay “gangsta” raps.
Stop being a fuckin douche. You had to know that you would get criticism when you posted it, so stop bitching.
[quote]bluefingas wrote:
No, I can’t do better, cuz I DON’T want to do better.
I have no interest in gay “gangsta” raps.
Stop being a fuckin douche. You had to know that you would get criticism when you posted it, so stop bitching.[/quote]
So you suck at music, stop bitching about it. Peace.
I accept your challenge bitch ass foo!
J/k, but seriously, I will put something up, but I’m not going to hate on your track just to hate. Anyone who tries writing or poetry should know not to hate other people’s creativity. But I do have to say, if you’re going to write “gangsta rap” make sure you’re a gangsta first…otherwise it comes off as fake.
The whole gangsta rap thing was kind a joke, hence the ^_^. I’m not really gonna get into things I have or haven’t done. Having some internet gangsterism debate is worthless. My goal is not to become a gangster rapper or any other minstrel show, rather, I’d like to flow/rhyme a series of characters to create cool music and deep stories. None of these characters would be directly -me. I’m trying to make music, that’s really it. Not build some fake ass street cred character.
As for doing gangster rap, most of the stuff I’ve done is spoken word about some girl, or some motivational spoken word, outside of the realm of rap. My friend is more into the hip hop, and I’m definetely interested in working with him.
[quote]That One Guy wrote:
I accept your challenge bitch ass foo!
J/k, but seriously, I will put something up, but I’m not going to hate on your track just to hate. Anyone who tries writing or poetry should know not to hate other people’s creativity. But I do have to say, if you’re going to write “gangsta rap” make sure you’re a gangsta first…otherwise it comes off as fake.[/quote]
I respect that. This is like lifting weights.
Some dude says youre a pussy and weak, but then won’t lift in front of your or back his numbers.
I look at all things in this way. It’s nice to know there are ppl still at that level.
Get audacity, get an instrumental, post to youtube. It’s p* simple.
Gettinitdone, your lyrics are perhaps some of the most terrible I’ve ever read. It’s just banal trendy jabber, tried to fit some urban black stereotype dialect. I’d like to see how you’d actually spit those on this track or anyother. Especially considering your from New Zealand. If you have balls you will do so.