Hi guys, I’m a young noob, who makes gangster rap.
Please evaluate… 
I guess you bought a drum machine huh, HAHAHAHAHA.
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
Hi guys, I’m a young noob, who makes gay rap.
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We get it, you think black and white culture should never mix and that black people and white people should be completely different in all ways.
I’d give it a D-, but I only listened for about 30 seconds so it’s possible it improved as it went along.
Man you guys are brutal. This took 4 hours to make. I give it a B.
you did not try to get wicked did you?
Really? sounds like you did it in 3
I challenge anyone to make a better rap song than I have posted here. You guys are all just haters. I do shit, you guys talk shit. Seriously, this forum is just full of tactless hater trolls, you talk but you don’t do. So step up, make something better.
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
I challenge anyone to make a better rap song than I have posted here. You guys are all just haters. I do shit, you guys talk shit. Seriously, this forum is just full of tactless hater trolls, you talk but you don’t do. So step up, make something better.[/quote]
are you even a gangster?
how much you droppin, thug? What are you claiming?
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
I challenge anyone to make a better rap song than I have posted here. You guys are all just haters. I do shit, you guys talk shit. Seriously, this forum is just full of tactless hater trolls, you talk but you don’t do. So step up, make something better.[/quote]
Get a grip…out of all the trollish shit you have exposed us to since being on the forum,you’re offended. Hilarious.
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
I challenge anyone to make a better rap song than I have posted here. You guys are all just haters. I do shit, you guys talk shit. Seriously, this forum is just full of tactless hater trolls, you talk but you don’t do. So step up, make something better.[/quote]
Interesting.
The fact that you didn’t take that anger and express it in a ‘gangsta rap’ recording, then post it to call out TNation ‘hater trolls’ shows that you ain’t legit, yo!
Sounds more like the gorilaz than nwa.
I would have made the lyrics stand out more, more crisp. It is not defined enough with the background music
[quote]Big_Boss wrote:
[quote]3IdSpetsnaz wrote:
I challenge anyone to make a better rap song than I have posted here. You guys are all just haters. I do shit, you guys talk shit. Seriously, this forum is just full of tactless hater trolls, you talk but you don’t do. So step up, make something better.[/quote]
Get a grip…out of all the trollish shit you have exposed us to since being on the forum,you’re offended. Hilarious. [/quote]
I sir, am no troll.
I’m eagerly anticipating someone to make something better than this. If not, I win, and you all lose.
gay
Lol@this, so if one thinks something is crap, it means one has to be able to do it better? That’s a load of bull.
There is a big difference in being able to recognice quality and actually being able to create quality as well.
You appear to be able to do neither. Then again I “hate” rap, so what am I to say.
So if this song sucks, and some of you claim to be conossieurs of rhymes. Please indulge me in, why exactly it sucks.
I wouldn’t say it sucks at all. Just unpolished, and certainly not gangsta by any stretch.
You’ll get better with practice and once your production starts getting more “professional”.
I would say though that becoming more humble and learning how to take criticism will go a long way in helping you get much better, much faster.