I am considering writing a relatively long work of fiction this summer (60-100 MS Word pages). However, I have not written fiction in some time. Would somebody be willing to read over the first page or so that i have so far and provide feedback?
It will be impossible to infer the plot from the one-pager, obviously, but I am looking for feedback on everything else besides plot (style, use of language, clarity, strength of setting, etc.).
It’s a satire of American suburbia and American consumerism. I know these themes have an audience on the Nation.
If interested, PM me your e-mail address and I’ll send it your way.
Thanks a ton.
Best,
Kombat