Anyone Care to Read Fiction?

I am considering writing a piece of extended fiction and finished writing the first chapter. Would anybody like me to PM it to them? Any critique, cristism, and/or advice would be appreciated.

Send it to me.

[quote]KombatAthlete wrote:
I am considering writing a piece of extended fiction and finished writing the first chapter. Would anybody like me to PM it to them? Any critique, cristism, and/or advice would be appreciated. [/quote]

ship it

Bump

Yeah dude, I’ll read it.

i’ll read it

I’d like to read it.

I’ll bite.

Shoot it my way.

Sure.
I’m an English teacher if that means anything…with some literary ambitions of my own.

I’d like to read it.

Please send me a copy.

I’ll read it.