new song:
Disregard my previous post.
new song:
Fuck that was awful.
If you want to be a musician/artist you have to actually have a point. The only reason mainstream rappers can rap about basically nothing is because they have an entire team of synthesizers, musicians, and producers behind them, and they make music almost exclusively for the “clubs” (and the bedroom). Even then, a lot of the time, they do have a point and they can hit home with their audience at least once during the song.
Some southern white guy rhyming poorly about why he’s really great just comes across as being retarded.
If you aren’t familiar with any real underground (white) rappers, some good ones for you to check out would be Atmosphere (slug), Sole, Aesop Rock, Sage Francis, and then pretty much everyone associated with Anticon.
Here are some songs…
[quote]mr popular wrote:
Fuck that was awful.
If you want to be a musician/artist you have to actually have a point. The only reason mainstream rappers can rap about basically nothing is because they have an entire team of synthesizers, musicians, and producers behind them, and they make music almost exclusively for the “clubs” (and the bedroom). Even then, a lot of the time, they do have a point and they can hit home with their audience at least once during the song.
Some southern white guy rhyming poorly about why he’s really great just comes across as being retarded.
If you aren’t familiar with any real underground (white) rappers, some good ones for you to check out would be Atmosphere (slug), Sole, Aesop Rock, Sage Francis, and then pretty much everyone associated with Anticon.
Here are some songs…
[/quote]
You don’t need to link me artists. I’ve heard of all of those. I’m not them though. But uh, thanks for listening. If you want a song with a point, go listen to Intergalactic. Imma just go ahead and keep rapping about whatever floats my boat.
OP,
Terrible, terrible stuff.
I’m not even being a dick, that was straight godawful. Your flow is off, lyrics are dull, no content, no presence on the mic, no multis, no change-ups, nothing there to keep my interest at all. Your voice reminds me of Del, and I’m sure that’s no coincidence, but he always had flow and knew how to emphasise and effectively use enunciation to make it interesting. Not to mention he’s written some dumb imaginative stuff.
Rap more, rap other peoples’ stuff, freestyle, write some complex shit, write some simple shit, write a hook, whatever, just write more, rap more and make damn sure you sound a fuckton better than this before you perform anything in front of anybody.
Artem. I’m not sure which of the two you are, but the first verse dude has some flow, the second verse one sounds like Slug on scotch, but at least he said some funny shit. The ‘my dick is a lure’ line made me chuckle.
[quote]Artem wrote:
You don’t need to link me artists. I’ve heard of all of those. I’m not them though. But uh, thanks for listening. If you want a song with a point, go listen to Intergalactic. Imma just go ahead and keep rapping about whatever floats my boat.
[/quote]
I wasn’t referring to you, I was referring to the OP… I didn’t even listen to your stuff
[quote]mr popular wrote:
[quote]Artem wrote:
You don’t need to link me artists. I’ve heard of all of those. I’m not them though. But uh, thanks for listening. If you want a song with a point, go listen to Intergalactic. Imma just go ahead and keep rapping about whatever floats my boat.
[/quote]
I wasn’t referring to you, I was referring to the OP… I didn’t even listen to your stuff[/quote]
my b
[quote]Artem wrote:
[quote]mr popular wrote:
[quote]Artem wrote:
You don’t need to link me artists. I’ve heard of all of those. I’m not them though. But uh, thanks for listening. If you want a song with a point, go listen to Intergalactic. Imma just go ahead and keep rapping about whatever floats my boat.
[/quote]
I wasn’t referring to you, I was referring to the OP… I didn’t even listen to your stuff[/quote]
my b[/quote]
I just listened to one of your things.
Not as bad as the OP, but still pretty horrendous.
If you’re not making club music, you realize rap is supposed to be poetry right?
“bitch make me a sandwich” doesn’t exactly hit home for a lot of people who might want to listen to your sick rhymes…
[quote]mr popular wrote:
[quote]Artem wrote:
[quote]mr popular wrote:
[quote]Artem wrote:
You don’t need to link me artists. I’ve heard of all of those. I’m not them though. But uh, thanks for listening. If you want a song with a point, go listen to Intergalactic. Imma just go ahead and keep rapping about whatever floats my boat.
[/quote]
I wasn’t referring to you, I was referring to the OP… I didn’t even listen to your stuff[/quote]
my b[/quote]
I just listened to one of your things.
Not as bad as the OP, but still pretty horrendous.
If you’re not making club music, you realize rap is supposed to be poetry right?
“bitch make me a sandwich” doesn’t exactly hit home for a lot of people who might want to listen to your sick rhymes…[/quote]
That’s not even my verse, but I liked it. If it doesn’t hit home with someone, they can turn the song off. And rap is rap and poetry is poetry. Rap isn’t just poetry read to music like most who don’t rap or listen to it seem to believe.