What if Your True Love Died 400 Yrs Ago

[quote]ag918w35 wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]Makavali wrote:
Here’s a tip: If you can’t type a coherent sentence without putting in an effort, you’re not going to get published. A proper writer is able to create a sentence that forms a clear statement of their ideas. It flows naturally for them. Already I can safely say I have a better chance of getting a book published than you, and I’m a fucking terrible writer. I’m not saying I expect “proper” English from a Bodybuilding website, I’m saying I expect it from an aspiring author.

Even Stephenie Meyer could write circles around you.[/quote]

trust me when i tell you, its much different typing here than writing a book. writing a book, you can sit and think about exactly how you want to describe certain things. here, i just type. you think writing a book is easy?? try it sometime. try making up a story. you can be great at putting sentences together, but that doesn’t mean you can write a book. [/quote]

Here’s another tip: you suck at logic. I agree that there is more to writing a book than writing a sentence, but the opposite is not true. If you cannot write a single coherent sentence, you are not going to be able to write a whole book full of them.

BTW, the paragraph above took me roughly 30 seconds to type, with no advance outlining or reading of grammar books. If it takes you terribly long to write these coherent sentences you’re never going to get the book out in any case.

Carry on.[/quote]

How exactly are my sentences not coherent?? Am I speaking a different language? I seem to be typing complete sentences, from what I can see. Not sure what your talking about. well, i have 91 pages written. so, think again about my book not getting put out. lol

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]GCF wrote:

[quote]pushharder wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]Ct. Rockula wrote:
I’ve written Charles Manson letters before.[/quote]

everyone calls charles manson a murderer. but do they realize, this guy wasn’t convicted of murder, cause he never actually killed anyone. he was convicted of conspiracy to committ murder. basically, his followers took a plee deal to testify against him. so they then testified that charlie planned it and told them to kill those people. these weren’t kids, these were adults capable of making thier own decisions. so they put all the blame on charlie. [/quote]

OMG, this just keeps gettin better and better.[/quote]

Haha. Exactly. I love this thread. T-Nation needs another delusion nutbar since tribunalDude left.

Step up to the plate RV - and please don’t give me that ‘I’m not a nutbar, you can’t understand unless you too fell in love with a woman who died centuries ago… boo hoo no one understands me’ schtick. I can quite honestly say I think you have some serious issues. However it makes for compelling reading. As you were.
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dude, do you beleive in god. well, i can easily call you a delusional nutbar for doing so. have you ever met god?? but yet people beleive. so yet, im the nutbar, cause i think i met someone in perhaps a different life. but oh, different lives don’t exist, im a nutbar, lol. ok. if you say so, mr. hypocrit. people want to get nasty with me. say hello to satan himself, people here will wish they never met this side. i try to be a nice guy. [/quote]

I don’t believe in God.

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]ag918w35 wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]Makavali wrote:
Here’s a tip: If you can’t type a coherent sentence without putting in an effort, you’re not going to get published. A proper writer is able to create a sentence that forms a clear statement of their ideas. It flows naturally for them. Already I can safely say I have a better chance of getting a book published than you, and I’m a fucking terrible writer. I’m not saying I expect “proper” English from a Bodybuilding website, I’m saying I expect it from an aspiring author.

Even Stephenie Meyer could write circles around you.[/quote]

trust me when i tell you, its much different typing here than writing a book. writing a book, you can sit and think about exactly how you want to describe certain things. here, i just type. you think writing a book is easy?? try it sometime. try making up a story. you can be great at putting sentences together, but that doesn’t mean you can write a book. [/quote]

Here’s another tip: you suck at logic. I agree that there is more to writing a book than writing a sentence, but the opposite is not true. If you cannot write a single coherent sentence, you are not going to be able to write a whole book full of them.

BTW, the paragraph above took me roughly 30 seconds to type, with no advance outlining or reading of grammar books. If it takes you terribly long to write these coherent sentences you’re never going to get the book out in any case.

Carry on.[/quote]

How exactly are my sentences not coherent?? Am I speaking a different language? I seem to be typing complete sentences, from what I can see. Not sure what your talking about. well, i have 91 pages written. so, think again about my book not getting put out. lol[/quote]

You have 91 pages of gibberish then. Spell check won’t pick up that you’ve used “your” instead of “you’re”. Spell check won’t pick up “???” instead of “?!” or “?”. Your book isn’t getting published by anyone reputable.

[quote]GCF wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]GCF wrote:

[quote]pushharder wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]Ct. Rockula wrote:
I’ve written Charles Manson letters before.[/quote]

everyone calls charles manson a murderer. but do they realize, this guy wasn’t convicted of murder, cause he never actually killed anyone. he was convicted of conspiracy to committ murder. basically, his followers took a plee deal to testify against him. so they then testified that charlie planned it and told them to kill those people. these weren’t kids, these were adults capable of making thier own decisions. so they put all the blame on charlie. [/quote]

OMG, this just keeps gettin better and better.[/quote]

Haha. Exactly. I love this thread. T-Nation needs another delusion nutbar since tribunalDude left.

Step up to the plate RV - and please don’t give me that ‘I’m not a nutbar, you can’t understand unless you too fell in love with a woman who died centuries ago… boo hoo no one understands me’ schtick. I can quite honestly say I think you have some serious issues. However it makes for compelling reading. As you were.
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dude, do you beleive in god. well, i can easily call you a delusional nutbar for doing so. have you ever met god?? but yet people beleive. so yet, im the nutbar, cause i think i met someone in perhaps a different life. but oh, different lives don’t exist, im a nutbar, lol. ok. if you say so, mr. hypocrit. people want to get nasty with me. say hello to satan himself, people here will wish they never met this side. i try to be a nice guy. [/quote]

I don’t believe in God.[/quote]

But if you believe in pink fairies, I can believe in blue ones!

[quote]Stern wrote:

[quote]Ct. Rockula wrote:
Wooooooooo

Yes,Rogue. Bring the pain.

HERE COMES SATAN[/quote]

OMFG I nearly, actually, pee’d a little there laughing so hard. =D[/quote]

You think mr satan is funny?

Rogue, give u a couple of pages from the book.

[quote]Makavali wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]ag918w35 wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]Makavali wrote:
Here’s a tip: If you can’t type a coherent sentence without putting in an effort, you’re not going to get published. A proper writer is able to create a sentence that forms a clear statement of their ideas. It flows naturally for them. Already I can safely say I have a better chance of getting a book published than you, and I’m a fucking terrible writer. I’m not saying I expect “proper” English from a Bodybuilding website, I’m saying I expect it from an aspiring author.

Even Stephenie Meyer could write circles around you.[/quote]

trust me when i tell you, its much different typing here than writing a book. writing a book, you can sit and think about exactly how you want to describe certain things. here, i just type. you think writing a book is easy?? try it sometime. try making up a story. you can be great at putting sentences together, but that doesn’t mean you can write a book. [/quote]

Here’s another tip: you suck at logic. I agree that there is more to writing a book than writing a sentence, but the opposite is not true. If you cannot write a single coherent sentence, you are not going to be able to write a whole book full of them.

BTW, the paragraph above took me roughly 30 seconds to type, with no advance outlining or reading of grammar books. If it takes you terribly long to write these coherent sentences you’re never going to get the book out in any case.

Carry on.[/quote]

How exactly are my sentences not coherent?? Am I speaking a different language? I seem to be typing complete sentences, from what I can see. Not sure what your talking about. well, i have 91 pages written. so, think again about my book not getting put out. lol[/quote]

You have 91 pages of gibberish then. Spell check won’t pick up that you’ve used “your” instead of “you’re”. Spell check won’t pick up “???” instead of “?!” or “?”. Your book isn’t getting published by anyone reputable.[/quote]

you don’t have the foggiest idea of what my book is all about. it would surprise you. I would never use ???, like that while writing. its just to make a point on here. like i said, how i write on here is vastly different than how I write for my book. night and day.

I know they’ll end up together, it’s only destiny. Haven’t you guys watched TV? They’ll find a way, TIME CANNOT STOP YOU ROGUE.

[quote]Reygekan wrote:
I know they’ll end up together, it’s only destiny. Haven’t you guys watched TV? They’ll find a way, TIME CANNOT STOP YOU ROGUE.[/quote]

LOLOLOL amazing avatar hahahahaha

[quote]waylanderxx wrote:

[quote]Reygekan wrote:
I know they’ll end up together, it’s only destiny. Haven’t you guys watched TV? They’ll find a way, TIME CANNOT STOP YOU ROGUE.[/quote]

LOLOLOL amazing avatar hahahahaha[/quote]

It does add quite the slimming effect on pale shrek.

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]Makavali wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]ag918w35 wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]Makavali wrote:
Here’s a tip: If you can’t type a coherent sentence without putting in an effort, you’re not going to get published. A proper writer is able to create a sentence that forms a clear statement of their ideas. It flows naturally for them. Already I can safely say I have a better chance of getting a book published than you, and I’m a fucking terrible writer. I’m not saying I expect “proper” English from a Bodybuilding website, I’m saying I expect it from an aspiring author.

Even Stephenie Meyer could write circles around you.[/quote]

trust me when i tell you, its much different typing here than writing a book. writing a book, you can sit and think about exactly how you want to describe certain things. here, i just type. you think writing a book is easy?? try it sometime. try making up a story. you can be great at putting sentences together, but that doesn’t mean you can write a book. [/quote]

Here’s another tip: you suck at logic. I agree that there is more to writing a book than writing a sentence, but the opposite is not true. If you cannot write a single coherent sentence, you are not going to be able to write a whole book full of them.

BTW, the paragraph above took me roughly 30 seconds to type, with no advance outlining or reading of grammar books. If it takes you terribly long to write these coherent sentences you’re never going to get the book out in any case.

Carry on.[/quote]

How exactly are my sentences not coherent?? Am I speaking a different language? I seem to be typing complete sentences, from what I can see. Not sure what your talking about. well, i have 91 pages written. so, think again about my book not getting put out. lol[/quote]

You have 91 pages of gibberish then. Spell check won’t pick up that you’ve used “your” instead of “you’re”. Spell check won’t pick up “???” instead of “?!” or “?”. Your book isn’t getting published by anyone reputable.[/quote]

you don’t have the foggiest idea of what my book is all about. it would surprise you. I would never use ???, like that while writing. its just to make a point on here. like i said, how i write on here is vastly different than how I write for my book. night and day. [/quote]

The people who read your book will have no idea what it’s about either.

Things like you writing “its just to make a point”.

[It’s just to make a point on here.]

Capital at the start of sentences. Its is not It’s.

The fact that you even have a different style of writing for internet posting and writing your “book” indicates you lack the natural ability to be fluent in a human language. And I mean really fluent, like an actual author. They don’t have an internet style and a writing style. They have a style. Full fucking stop.

[quote]BONEZ217 wrote:

[quote]waylanderxx wrote:

[quote]Reygekan wrote:
I know they’ll end up together, it’s only destiny. Haven’t you guys watched TV? They’ll find a way, TIME CANNOT STOP YOU ROGUE.[/quote]

LOLOLOL amazing avatar hahahahaha[/quote]

It does add quite the slimming effect on pale shrek. [/quote]
I think part of that is because they look so happy together. You can tell that Satan over there is just all cuddles and rainbows when he’s with his woman, it really makes him look more human and less elephant.

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]super saiyan wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]super saiyan wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]TheBodyGuard wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:
that my friends is called “heresay” [/quote]

JESUS H do you have any education or sophistication at all. That my friend is called “witness testimony” - not heresay! SMFH[/quote]

ahhh, listen you dumb shit, first of all, witness testimony are people that actually see a crime taking place. yes, its testimony, as is anything a person says in court is testimony. but when there is no direct evidence at all, and they go by the word of already confessed killers, and then being tortured, anything they say about someone else doing something has to be looked at very closely.

sophistication, what does that have to do with what i said. I was simply making the point that her case would have been laughed out of any court in the world, today.[/quote]

You are an idiot. If you kill someone and I see you do it, I can testify in court about your actions because I have personal knowledge of it; that’s not hearsay and it IS direct evidence. Testimony is direct evidence when the witness personally observed the act. So if the servants saw her torturing and killing people, that is direct evidence moron. [/quote]

its common knowledge, that people always look to blame someone else for their actions. these servants knew, they were after the countess. these were admitted killers who were caught in the act. the countess wasn’t. sorry, to me thats not direct evidence. anyone can say anything they like. but it has to be credible evidence. i can say your mom blew me, that doesn’t mean she did, now does it.

anyone can say anything about anyone. does it make it true. of course not. oh, they said she did it, big freaken deal. of course they are going to say that. or she made us do it. how can she make you do it, when she wasn’t even there. like i said, it would be laughed out of any court in this world today. it was a sham. do some research. imagine a woman of incredible power and wealth.

men hate women like that today, imagine 400 years ago, were women were just property, for the most part. witness testimony can be powerful evidence if it comes from reputable and upstanding citizens. but when testimony comes from admitted killers, their testimony is crap. pure and simple. even today, most scholars beleive at the very least, it was politically motivated. thats the very least. many now beleive it was a total set up.

she was in charge of her servants, and her sevants did do commit brutal crimes, and that she is guilty. but when you look at the times she lived in, where brutality was common place, things were different back then.[/quote]

You can’t just say, “to me that’s not direct evidence.” There is a definition for what direct evidence is. The fact that you don’t like it doesn’t make it circumstantial evidence. It doesn’t mean that it’s enough evidence to get a conviction, but you can’t simply make up your own definitions.

I continue to be amazed and baffled by the constant flow of BS emanating from your posts. You try to act like you know what you’re talking about, when it’s obvious you have no clue.

Imagine this modern-day scenario. There is a rich and powerful woman that lives in a mansion. It’s discovered that for years, her live-in servants have been killing and torturing young girls inside the mansion. They are caught and as they are interviewed, they all say that the rich woman not only directed them to commit theses acts, but that she herself had a hand in it. Do you really think the police and prosecuting attorney would just laugh off these allegations? [/quote]

ok, I do understand what your saying. but these 4 servants were caught in the act committing these crimes, while the countess wasn’t there. They might do an investigation, yes. but when all you have is the word of admitted killers. and they admitted in court transcripts to killing the girls, each one admitted to the killings.

not to mention being caught red handed. the biggest thing is that she was never allowed to testify on her own behalf. they knew she would blast their whole case to shreds. she had no defense. [/quote]

Again, JESUS H you’re fucking bat shit crazy and dumb. I’m beginning to understand why you see yourself as some sort of Peter Pan. You are one stunted individual.

You don’t follow too many RICO cases do you? Built entirely on the backs of informants that were caught “doing the dirt” including murders, and later implicated co-conspirators to save their own ass and shave time off their sentences. There are many many many men sitting in jail now for the REST OF THEIR LIVES based on such testimony.

Do you live in a cave, or just look like you do?

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]ag918w35 wrote:

[quote]roguevampire wrote:

[quote]Makavali wrote:
Here’s a tip: If you can’t type a coherent sentence without putting in an effort, you’re not going to get published. A proper writer is able to create a sentence that forms a clear statement of their ideas. It flows naturally for them. Already I can safely say I have a better chance of getting a book published than you, and I’m a fucking terrible writer. I’m not saying I expect “proper” English from a Bodybuilding website, I’m saying I expect it from an aspiring author.

Even Stephenie Meyer could write circles around you.[/quote]

trust me when i tell you, its much different typing here than writing a book. writing a book, you can sit and think about exactly how you want to describe certain things. here, i just type. you think writing a book is easy?? try it sometime. try making up a story. you can be great at putting sentences together, but that doesn’t mean you can write a book. [/quote]

Here’s another tip: you suck at logic. I agree that there is more to writing a book than writing a sentence, but the opposite is not true. If you cannot write a single coherent sentence, you are not going to be able to write a whole book full of them.

BTW, the paragraph above took me roughly 30 seconds to type, with no advance outlining or reading of grammar books. If it takes you terribly long to write these coherent sentences you’re never going to get the book out in any case.

Carry on.[/quote]

How exactly are my sentences not coherent?? Am I speaking a different language? I seem to be typing complete sentences, from what I can see. Not sure what your talking about. well, i have 91 pages written. so, think again about my book not getting put out. lol[/quote]

Obvious logic fail: I typed 91 pages = my book will be published.
Kind like your previous logic = I abuse steroids, BUT I take a ton of fish oil and do my cardio, therefore I’m “healthy” (with no other evidence of the same, such as bloodwork).

Dude, you’re easily one of the dumbest posters here EVER. And I don’t mean that except in the sincerest way :slight_smile:

I’m truly baffled. This guy is off his meds, or was never on them. Or he is the very best troll EVER. If he’s a troll, motherfucker is first vote, Hall of Fame, All-Internet Forum First Team, All-Star Troll First Team 2011, Most Improved Troll 2011…motherfucker is the GOAT.

I happen to thing he’s incredibly disturbed and unsophisticated. We’re arguing with the mind of a 10 year old.

This is automatically the #1 thread of all time.

[quote]byukid wrote:
This is automatically the #1 thread of all time.[/quote]

Quite possible. But if OP sticks around, who knows what new heights he will ascend to? MJ won a bunch of rings. No reason to think RV is on the downside of his career.

TNation will need to start a “best of RV” thread though, to memorialize in one place every single nugget of gold.

[quote]Reygekan wrote:
I know they’ll end up together, it’s only destiny. Haven’t you guys watched TV? They’ll find a way, TIME CANNOT STOP YOU ROGUE.[/quote]

Awesome.